Mission Deepscan (Metroid Comic)

Well, first of all, Hi, i cant believe i have this name P). Anyways, ill post some of my comics here, there is about 5 a day... I hope you guys beat metroid fusion before reading this, otherwise it wont make sense... I hate panels btw, so i just make em one big picture, enjoy:






Im very sorry its so big is that fine?

"It has been a while since I have gone on my next mission"? That doesn't make a whole lot of sense. It'd make more sense if it read something more like "It has been a while since I have gone on a mission". Also, repeating text in the same panel gets kind of annoying.

There isn't enough material here to judge how good your comic is, but, judging from your grammar, I can imagine that it's going to be very amateur. No offense meant. That's my honest judgment.

Objection. After destroying the B.S.L. and the X/Metroids along with it(making Samus the last Metroid, but that's beyond the point), the Federation is pissed off at Samus. Plus, overly large pictures being borrowed from Fusion combined with poor grammar and repeating texts kinda shows this ain't going in a good direction.

I don't like it. The poor grammar just wreaks.